Saturday, June 17, 2017

I Know What You Did in Bandung

This is a short story I wrote back in fifth semester of uni as a mid-term exam. Very cheesy, but the lecturer of my Creative Writing class give me an A to this anyway, but your mileage may vary on the enjoyment.

“Wait for me, girls!” Lita pleaded to her friends shortly after they exited Braga Urban outlet. It was not an ideal afternoon; black clouds cloaked the Bandung sky throughout. Cold, strong wind swept through stands as local merchants packed their shop. After all, it was not really a good idea for shopping new clothing when it was almost raining. Nonetheless, the special edition badge and lower price tag on the clothes was the primary force for Lita to purchase them after brawling with the storeowner for one hour.

The girls strode the sidewalk to look for other items they want to buy. Reny wanted to find two sets of blouse to replace her old one, or else her superior will complain about her faded work dress. Fenilla searched for a clutch bag, said to Lita that it swung all the time when she carried it. Tika, meanwhile, were hunting for make-up sets, and there were several excellent quality product line being sold in Bandung stores with inexpensive price. They were arguing which store they should visit first, but resolved after Reny proposed an idea, “How about we go to our designated store ourselves and gather in one place before going back to Lita’s cousin flat? It’s 2 pm now, and we probably want to return before four.”

“Done deal.” Fenilla nodded, “I’m so hungry. Perhaps we can buy some snacks and ingredients for Mikha to make dinner.”

“It’s fine for me. You guys go then, I will wait at the new Seven Eleven there.” Lita pointed to a newly furnished building, painted in the trademark red and green stripes, a half block away from the store.
“Okay, Lita. We won’t be long.” Tika said to Lita, her eyes gleamed to sign a request, “Can you order three cups of latte when we arrive there?”
Lita nodded, “Just make sure you’re back before it’s raining hard!”

The girls agreed. Each of them went to separate ways to their respective target. Lita, having acquired the item she wanted, proceeded to the convenience store and took a seat at a canopy next to the main building. After buying one cup of coffee, she placed her shopping bags on the table, and began to focus on her Nokia phone.

She updated her Facebook and Twitter twenty minutes ago and there was still no sign of the girls. Lita looked around, and the only thing she saw was the people going in and out the store while hanging out with their friends or family.

However, an unusual view stung her head.

A three-year-old boy was staggering on the pavement. Usually, a child like him was not disturbing because not far from him would be his family watching over them. The problem hooked Lita to him was that he was walking alone, without any close supervision from any older person, not even his sister. She examined the boy more closely. The clothes and shoes he wore were tattered, with images of cartoon characters slightly visible due to its dye ripped off the cloth. Furthermore, he did not show any hand gestures nor approach other people as Lita often found with child beggars in Jakarta. No, this child was different, she said reflectively in her mind.

Another issue that bugged her as she drank her coffee was his eyes. He was so striking, with his long hair, flat brows, and slightly puffed cheek, but she did not see the cheerful, lively eyes as other children do. This boy was possibly lost, Lita said to herself, and did not know the way home. Only a few person paid attention to him, and they gave him some money because they thought he asked for it, but in reality, he just grabbed it in his palm.

Lita then decided to approach the boy. She crouched down so that she could speak with him. Before she could utter one word, a woman passed by, and said to her, “Girl, what happened? Do you know this boy?”

Lita turned around and answered the woman diplomatically, “No, I just want to talk with him.”
The woman smiled, “I see. It is almost raining now. You’d better tell him to go home.”
“I’ll do.”

The woman walked to the bus stop. Lita continued her attention to the boy. She gave her advice to the boy in soft voice, “It is almost raining, son. Where is your mom?”

The boy heeded her question. Conversely, he replied in hollow tone and uncompleted words, “Mom? Sister, do you know where mom? You take me to her?”

Lita’s throat was stuck; he did not know where his mom was.

Before she could do anything, the blessing of the earth poured down. Lita and the boy soaked in the rainfall. She immediately grabbed him, “Come on, we need to shelter from this heavy rain,” wrapped the boy in her embrace, and returned to the store’s canopy.

Lita checked their clothes. It was very damp, and begun to feel uncomfortable. “You must be cold,” Lita said to the boy.

“Yes. It is very cold.” The boy’s innocent voice could be heard. She was only wearing long sleeves and black jeans, but she was certain that the boy was shivering more severe from her, as the shirts and pants were thinner from her own.

“Guess I have no other choice,” she murmured to herself. She grabbed one of her shopping bag, and put out the new jacket she just bought. “We can share this jacket to keep us warm,”

    As they waited for the rain to stop, Lita chose to continue her questions, “I don’t know where your mom is, but I can take you to her. What about your dad?”

“I only live with mom. Dad gone long. Mom said he went to heaven, and she will too later.”

Lita could feel her heart fell in bullet time for a split second. He was an orphan, and did not understand that his mom was very ill.

“When did you see your mom today?”

“Morning. Mom was sleeping all the time, so she called uncle Nana to take me out.”

So this boy wandered off from his guardian and her mom was at the brink of death. It was very deep for a boy of this age. Lita could not hold this anymore. The water was so strong, as if it was weeping for the boy’s parents who just passed back to the netherworld and the air was just doubled Lita’s fright of the boy’s life.

Thirty minutes had passed and still no sign of her friends or the rain to stop. Lita checked her phone, and sent a broadcast message to her friends that she would return late. She returned her attention to the boy, “what is your name?” she asked softly and gave chocolate bread she bought earlier.

“My mom call me Gippa.”

“Okay Gippa, it seems that the rain will not stop until Maghrib, so we have to get you home first. I will find uncle Nana and Sis want to ask something to him after you get home.”

“Thank you, sister. Hey, that’s uncle Nana” Gippa pointed to a man in shirt and trouser at the bus stop. He was confused all along even until he reached the bus stop. His eyes were looking back and forth, finding something he thought difficult.

“It’s great. Let’s go see him.”

Still holding Gippa, closed in her new jacket, and her shopping bag, Lita walked in fast pace to the bus station. She approached the man Gippa mentioned, and politely asked, “Excuse me, are you Mr. Nana?”

“Yes, I am. Pardon me, who are you?” Mr. Nana introduced himself.

“My name is Lita Mathina. I was waiting at the store when I found this boy walking without particular purpose. His name is Gippa and he said you brought him along before he got lost.”

Nana thanked with relief, “Gippa! Alhamdulillah, you’re all right! I’m so sorry I slipped my attention to you because I was helping an accident!”

“I thank you very much, Miss Lita. I thought a child trafficking syndicate or something caught Gippa.”

“Gippa mentioned that his mother was going to die. Is that true? Who are you actually?” Lita became curious.

“In all condolences, yes, she died only half an hour after I brought Gippa with me this morning. Post-mortem report said that she died of type C hepatitis, a disease she had fought ever since Gippa’s birth. As for me, I’m actually a caretaker of an orphanage. Not really an orphanage, more like a child rehabilitation center.”

“And his father?”
“He was my best friend. We built the orphanage together. A great man with a great vision, but not blessed in his health. He died when his wife reached fifth month of her pregnancy. A traffic accident, as far as I know.”
“I’m so sorry to hear that” Lita wept her tears, “So Gippa is going to stay in your orphanage?”
“By her mother’s will, yes.” Nana agreed with the statement.
Lita made her decision. She knew what she would do. Whether her friends and family like it or not, she would continue on.
“I want to discuss something with you, sir. But now, let’s go back to your orphanage."

*****
“So you were stalking me all the time, Arfan?” Lita was shocked. She drank her coffee to relief her shudder. Her brows accentually frowned, with Gippa playing a car toy on her lap “You shadowy plump! What are you doing in Bandung anyway?”

“Well, I couldn’t help it,” I smiled to her, “I was visiting my family there. I went around the town for a while and I spotted you at the Seven-Eleven before it was raining. I followed you then, but not before I picked up a five-year-old girl before I found you and she was very much like the boy you brought in. Besides, your mother asked me to take care of you should you run to any trouble. I was the one who took you to Mikha’s apartment when you were too cold and tired to walk and just slept when you got into my car.”

We spent our time in a humble café at the Kalibata Riverview. It was a cool afternoon, if not crowdy, since it was Saturday. I brought Mia with me, a five-year-old girl I adopted last week at the same time Lita adopted Gippa, and unbeknownst to Lita, a ring. After all I saw in Bandung, I knew this was the perfect opportunity to say it to her after knowing each other since we were kids.”

“So you knew everything I did in Bandung last week?” Lita said.
“Yes.”
“And what do you want me to do here?”
“You know, from what I saw you last week, you are not like what you seem to me in our childhood. You have grown… matured… to be a motherly figure. I always know that you will have this trait somehow.”
“I know. Women will show their compassion and true self when they have children with them.”
“And it brings me today to my request.” I grabbed my ring’s case.
“What is it?”
“I want you… to answer me… as these children became our witness… would you like to be my wife, the half of me, and unite in a holy matrimony, forever, until death tears us apart?” I opened the case and showed the titanium alloy ring with emerald to her, much to her amazement.
“Arfan..., but we’re just friends…, you never told me that you loved me…”
“Well, actions speak louder than words, am I correct?”
“I do love you, but, I think this was so soon…” Lita voiced her hesitance
“Not really. We were just graduated, weren’t we?”
“If so then… Yes, I do.”
I held her in joyful feeling I’ve never felt before. The whole café seemed to notice it, and gave their applause to us. Gippa and Mia asked us, “What happened?”
“You will have a whole family again, children. Your dad and your mom. We will stay as a family together, forever.”


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